tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8197716958751708054.post4425799747513171580..comments2023-10-09T10:34:58.388-07:00Comments on fight club: PAGE 3BONEShttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11184596557565978159noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8197716958751708054.post-31558642622773425392008-09-30T19:46:00.000-07:002008-09-30T19:46:00.000-07:00yeah, ill be fixing the text before i finish every...yeah, ill be fixing the text before i finish everything. and yeah, i get what you mean about lullaby. i kind of liked it though :)BONEShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11184596557565978159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8197716958751708054.post-80823889649983608822008-09-24T20:05:00.000-07:002008-09-24T20:05:00.000-07:00Regarding page 2: I guess that only applies to the...Regarding page 2: I guess that only applies to the size that you had posted on Deviant Art! I didn't re-check-out the pages before I went ahead and started babbling.jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09561549031407865143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8197716958751708054.post-26204128381432103122008-09-24T20:04:00.000-07:002008-09-24T20:04:00.000-07:00These are looking really frigging sweet right now,...These are looking really frigging sweet right now, though page 2 - when you go to print it all together, if at all possible I'd try to make the text bigger.<BR/>Personally, I only really glanced over the page. With a cursory familiarity with what the text ought to be (it's been a few years since I read it, but--) it was too much trouble to try and make out the tiny lettering.<BR/><BR/>Otherwise, looking fantastic. Especially compared to the other Palahniuk graphic novel(s) floating around the 'net -- not that the artists behind them aren't utterly fabulous.<BR/>But say, the Lullaby one which I scanned over, the style it was worked out in was a little abstract, and left a terrible feeling of disjointedness on the reader.<BR/>It was mostly impossible to spot the characters in the artwork, and thus made it a difficult read visually. Not as easy to identify with squiggles which you think ought to be a man and a chandelier, but can't really make heads or tails of.jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09561549031407865143noreply@blogger.com